Author's note: This is a predicting piece about "Thank you ma'am"
In the future I predict that Roger will get what he wants and then he will meet the old woman again sometime when he is older. I predict this because if a kid is stealing pocketbooks at his age he won't change in the future. Even if he told her that he would change he probably won't.
I predict that they will run into each other again and he will try to steal the pocketbook again. He will be successful this time and the woman will call the police to arrest him. There are only a few things that point this direction. first he never truly thanked her for the money and he will keep stealing because he has no money.
I really like this piece. I think that you included everything that you needed to include was in here. One thing that you could improve on is your word choice i think that you could use stronger words. But overall i think you did a really nice job on this.
ReplyDeleteI agree with Ashley this was a really well written piece and I enjoyed reading it. I think that you could improve on your word choice. But overall it was nice!
ReplyDeleteGood Job, i can see that happening, but i noticed a word wasn't capitalized when it should be, but other than that it was fine.
ReplyDeleteI liked reading this piece. It was well written, but you may have needed to improve on your word choice and possibly add another reason why you thought he would steal her money again. because he did try to thank her for everything.
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